Mr. Shaodow/Smilex: Look out, there’s a Black Man Coming (Rock Mix)

There’s several inherent problems with melding rap with rock. First of all it’s a pretty cliché-ridden combination, something the press release accompanying this collaboration conforms to – it’s utter tripe of the highest order, taken verbatim from the Introduction to Hype 101 manual. “Musical worlds colliding with explosive results” and all that crap. Secondly, rap is not known for its musical dexterity or complexity, in fact it’s predicated on precisely the opposite approach of minimalism, which allows the artist to deliver their message untroubled by tricksy arrangements or difficult key changes. This presents most rock bands with something of a quandary, as few musicians get pleasure from playing a four-to-the floor beat and the same few notes for four or five minutes solid. A rock song is built along different lines. Get it wrong and you end up with Nu-Metal or, god forbid, ‘Lethal’ by Anthrax/UTFO.

So combining Mr Shaodow, known for his biting, pithy, razor-sharp social and political commentary with Smilex, famed for their outlandish stage shows and big rock anthems, could have gone either way. Shaodow has no time for clichés, often performing a capella at his shows and challenging stereotypes of rappers with his intelligence and perception. Smilex on the other hand, whilst an incredibly entertaining and exciting band with some great tunes, are a cliché all to themselves. You know precisely what you’re going to get every time and they don’t stray from their well-defined path. They’ve become a local byword and blueprint for punky hard rock wrapped up in 80’s-style excess. That is a compliment, by the way.

In practice, somehow, the single manages to go *both* ways. It starts off pretty feeble, in truth. The aforementioned lack of a musically-interesting arrangement means that for the first half of the song Smilex are left chugging away ineffectually on an dull one-chord riff, the drum beat is lifted straight from the chorus of Def Leppard’s “Rocket”, and they are forced to try and spice things up with some random rock guitar noodling. Rage Against the Machine this is not. Smilex are often capable of making the simplest things sound immense, but even they struggle to pick this one up off the floor for the first minute and a half.

Despite the lumpen backing, Shaodow’s lyrics are given an extra element of bite and bile by the more aggressive production. The song stumbles in with a deliberately clumsy, garage-band-warming-up style intro but quickly gets into the meat of Shaodow’s tale of the perils of simply happening to be black. The all-too-predictable shouty chorus is undeniably massive, but even there you feel that the subtlety of the lyrics is somewhat lost in the effort of making it rock, and as the song races to its huge climax the lyrics get progressively more buried and more indecipherable.

Fortunately the second half is indeed much, much better; having got the tedious job of setting up the premise out of the way, Smilex finally manage to let rip and get a big groove going. It’s still variations on the same one-chord riff, but far less stilted and one-dimensional. Layer upon layer of gang vocals pile in and build the anger and momentum until the whole thing finally collapses under its own weight, dropping back to one last broken down chorus over a snippet of Shaodow’s original backing track. Ironically, it’s only now that you can really hear what’s being said.

Commendable then, and a long way from such travesties as Walk This Way and the like, but it still doesn’t quite hit the spot. Clarity is everything when you’re trying to get across a serious message, and here the message often gets buried amongst all the big rock bluster. On the other hand, Shaodow and Smilex have breathed new life into a three-year-old song that might now reach a different audience, and that can only be a good thing. Shaodow’s humorous turn of phrase belies the seriousness of the underlying message, and it’s truly sad to realise that a song like this even has to be written in the first decade of the twenty-first century. When looked at from that angle, they can do no wrong.

Mr Shaodow Myspace

Smilex Myspace

  • colinmackinnon

    Great review, Tim. It made me listen to both the old and the new versions!

    Must be due an album from Mr S!

  • http://www.gappytooth.com gappy

    And which one was better?

    I’m a big admirer of both these acts, & that song has got to be one of the best to come out of our little city in a few years, but this version does very little for me, I’m afraid. Could be fun live, I’ll admit.

    Shaodow’s done some interesting stuff live with Baby Gravy, I’d live to hear that recorded.

    I agree with Colin, nice review, in depth without sounding arid and academic.

  • Big Tim

    Sorry about the length of the review, I tried not to waffle on but self-editing is not my strong point. Cheers to the C-Mac for knocking it into shape!

  • http://www.myspace.com/smilex leesmilex

    thanks for taking so much time to review it tim – longer than we spent making it almost! even reviewed the press release! :-) i hope there was no residual bitterness there from when qfix made u remove vk’s ‘to the rats’ from your ‘fresh faces’ cd!
    btw it is a release for lovemusichateracism so it may have been worth mentioning?
    also pat has never heard def leppard’s rocket but i am sorry to see u know it so well!
    i have to say i find most of your comments on hiphop to be not only hugely misinformed/incorrect/under-researched but a bit insulting as i am sure many hiphop artists and fans would/already do. mentioning one obscure song no-one else knows does not necessarily prove a point so much as cover it in smoke and mirrors.
    i think it is also fair to say the track tends to appeal to heavyrock and hiphop fans!
    not all the band necessarily fall into this category even, let alone oxmusic bods! :-)
    also u kind of contradict yourself by saying hiphop’s music is too simple and the first half of track is boring because of this but then like it when the ideas flow later but cant follow the words enough (which i find odd btw). so it seems we can’t win really?
    and btw, since when was ‘walk this way’ a travesty?
    or ratm complicated? ‘freedom’ is one chord for the most part!
    thanks again though, genuinely, its obvious u took much effort and time on this and that says great things for the release in itself! hope u don’t mind the feedback dude!
    lester bangs this is not! 😉
    please don’t make the mistake of thinking this is bitching, i am grateful for the effort, comments and even more so the coverage, even have my own issues with the song, just find this review a bit confusing and not necessarily as on point as many of the comments suggest. most knowledgable hiphop fans who have read it seem to agree.

  • http://www.gappytooth.com gappy

    “Walk This Way” is fantastic, I agree Lee

  • Big Tim

    No worries Lee, was good to hear the tune. No residual bitterness at all, you know I’m a fan of Smilex and we totally understood about the VK track. We were more hacked off at their total lack of understanding about the principles of licensing than with you guys…!

    I apologise about not mentioning Love Music Hate Racism, it should indeed have been noted. My mistake entirely. Colin: Can you edit that in somehow please?!

    You’re right, I’m definitely no Lester Bangs, and I’m not an expert on hip-hop, but you’d be surprised how much of it I come across in an alternative reality to this one, so although I’m not a fan, I’m also not totally ignorant of it. I chose some pretty obvious references for that reason – I can’t claim indepth knowledge and I’d be rumbled pretty quickly if I tried to blag it. So I did try and review it from a largely rock angle, but mentioning the things I *do* know about hip-hop/rap.

    My point on the arrangement side was not that hip-hop has no credibility, no musical talent or anything like that, simply that in order for a rapper to rap effectively, the musical arrangement can’t get in the way. That doesn’t mean it has to be excessively simplistic or lack any musical merit, but muscial complexity is not something that features in most hip-hop. No-one raps over Dillenger Escape Plan style arrangements. I don’t think that’s derogatory to hip-hop/rap artists.

    And so I felt that the result of that was that you guys struggled to make the opening half of the song interesting, because you were deliberately keeping things back so Shaodow could get the rap across. It worked in that respect – the rap came across extremely well, but it sounded like you were bored or just couldn’t quite find the right musical underpinning. To be fair, I had to rack my brains for several hours while the drum beat bugged me before it clicked that it was Def Leppard. I’m not proud of knowing that either 😉

    And in the second half I felt that although the arrangement worked much better, the words were indeed buried away. That might have been a production thing rather than a performance thing, but the problem was basically inverted. First half: simple & slightly dull muscial arrangment but the rapping worked, second half: great musical arrangement but it buried the vocals and made them pretty unintelligable.

    But ultimately it is just my opinion, and overall I think it’s a really good track. I certainly wasn’t out to shoot it down. Having seen Shaodow several times (and nearly broken his CD player on one occasion…) it was good to hear a different angle on his stuff.

  • http://www.myspace.com/smilex leesmilex

    well replied sir, consider me much more in the picture! thanks again for the obvious effort and i genuinely hope you don’t take all i said the wrong way! if u want to check out some hiphop that is heavy on the musicality try the roots, antipopconsortium, saul wiliams, even outkast and public enemy if u pick the right tracks/albums! :-)
    the lester bangs thing was just being cheeky btw, i am not him either, or even iggy!
    still think u deserve a good spanking for the def leppard thing tho! maybe i will get pat to come and spank that beat into your backside! 😉 see u soon, thanks again oxbands!

  • Big Tim

    I look forward to getting a spanking from Pat (AKA “One arm” Holmberg) at the first opportunity!